tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828806124682659914.post3688171741710582681..comments2023-05-24T21:41:22.786+12:00Comments on Room 7's Learning Journey: Loren's 100 word challengePowerful Learners in Room 7!http://www.blogger.com/profile/09573781755387874599noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828806124682659914.post-90098524509494151082012-05-25T01:40:47.381+12:002012-05-25T01:40:47.381+12:00Well done you used a lot of wow words.Well done you used a lot of wow words.Louie robbiehttp://3g.sajsblogs.netnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828806124682659914.post-11984763732419675622012-05-25T01:31:48.693+12:002012-05-25T01:31:48.693+12:00I love your strong verbs and powerful adjectives! ...I love your strong verbs and powerful adjectives! It's better than my.Izabellahttp://3g.sajsblogs.netnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828806124682659914.post-35772965336694906952012-05-25T01:21:09.700+12:002012-05-25T01:21:09.700+12:00Wow that was good.I did a 100 word challang.Wow that was good.I did a 100 word challang.Emmahttp://3g.sajsblogs.netnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828806124682659914.post-81257607191804166422012-05-24T02:57:27.984+12:002012-05-24T02:57:27.984+12:00I loved the story you wrote. Even though you had a...I loved the story you wrote. Even though you had a few mistakes it was a great story!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828806124682659914.post-13236087182509843642012-05-24T02:33:32.435+12:002012-05-24T02:33:32.435+12:00What a lovely entry for the 100WC Loren! I really ...What a lovely entry for the 100WC Loren! I really enjoyed the variety of vocabulary you used as it made your story a pleasure to read. I especially liked reading about the elephants at the end - I wonder are they friendly or not so friendly? I hope to see more of your work :)<br /><br />Amy (Team 100WC)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828806124682659914.post-82907250662559790782012-05-22T03:14:18.567+12:002012-05-22T03:14:18.567+12:00I love this story for the prompt set by Brain Pop ...I love this story for the prompt set by Brain Pop Loren! I can feel the frustration of Tim & Moby of not getting anywhere and then the great happy ending. Or was it? Of course, the elephants may not be friendly and they may be hiding something. You have left it so that you could write another episode! Thank you so much for taking the time to join 100WC!Mrs Skinnernoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828806124682659914.post-25661722753090682322012-05-21T19:50:50.514+12:002012-05-21T19:50:50.514+12:00Hi Loren
I can picture your setting because you ha...Hi Loren<br />I can picture your setting because you have described it in a way that the reader can understand - a tropical evening and the crickets. I can actually hear the crickets!<br />I am intrigued to know what happens with the elephants. How did they end up in your story line? What will happen next?<br />A great first writing attempt for the 100 word challenge.<br />Well done!<br />Mrs NatuschPowerful Learners in Room 7!https://www.blogger.com/profile/09573781755387874599noreply@blogger.com