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Hi Room 7 I think this poem is about growing up. How when they were born they thought they were ...when they were born, and how they have changed as they have grown.
Sorry you were wrong. The poem was actually about a l, because it starts off small and flat, but now it's big and fat, and it's scared of pins. Thank you for your lovley nice comment.
Hi Room 7
ReplyDeleteI think this poem is about growing up.
How when they were born they thought they were ...when they were born, and how they have changed as they have grown.
Mrs Paton
Dear Mrs Paton
DeleteSorry you were wrong. The poem was actually about a l, because it starts off small and flat, but now it's big and fat, and it's scared of pins.
Thank you for your lovley nice comment.
From Leah in RM 7
To Thomas
ReplyDeleteIl ike the way u speaked clearly and you are using expression
From Zaric
Thanks for your comment Zaric! I sure Thomas will enjoy your feedback!
DeleteMrs Natusch
PS - Did you spell check your comment? What changes would you make to it? Let me know.
Dear Mrs Natusch
DeleteWell your welcome for the comment to Thomas.
And I didn't check my spelling.I kept reading it again.I should change it to "spoke"
To Room 7
ReplyDeleteI Love how Thomas used expression. I also think it is about growing up.
You have lots of big words in your poem. What poem are you going to do next?
From Victoria