It was a very cold morning this morning! We thought we would write a poem about it. As a class we all contributed our ideas to write a class poem.
One Frosty Morning
One Frosty Morning
Beautiful
frosty icicles in the shape of silver ferns,
Making sparkling crystals on the ground.
Icy leaves
dangling from bare trees.
Crunchy, icy
grass beneath my feet,
Feels like cold, hard, icy snow.
As slippery as frozen ice on an ice rink.
Dripping
water down frosty trees.
Looks like a white blanket covering the
shivering grass.
by Room 7
What do you like about our poem?
I ENJOYED THAT POETRY.YOU HAD LOTS OF DESCRIPTIVE WORDS IN THAT POEM.
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To Room7
ReplyDeleteI really like your poem because you have strong adjectives and you have good similes. And is your poem like the 5 senses.
Zaric (:
I really enjoyed the bit where it had slippery in it and the bear ice on the leaves.
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I loved the poem it was really cool I liked the bit were you said that the iciles were like silver ferns. from Jack
ReplyDeletei loved the descriptive words and how you wrote slippery in different font. my favourite bit was when it said white blanket and shivering grass.keara in tui class
ReplyDeleteI like how you put your feelings into the one Frosty monrning poem from rose in tui
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